a year ago
ButterflyBlu
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Undone (may be nsfw)
How can I miss you When you aren't even mine, but a world away, untouched, unseen, yet to be loved by me? "Impossible," I'd say, if you didn't have me so incredibly confused. Emotionally undone. I can't even remember this, the feeling I have now, deep inside: fiery, hot, a million butterflies beating needing escape. I close my eyes. Fighting it.. Scared of this, this new feeling... Acutely aware of the silence, a comfort for so long. Suddenly unwelcome Twisting, turning. This bed, my sanctuary, is swallowing me now. I groan. Just emptiness. Alone. Completely undone. © 2015 SJS - All Rights Reserved.
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very powerful stuff - I like the evocative imagery here and the sensation of desire and loneliness. Well done!
Thank you, @VinMcCarthy. I appreciate your kind words! ^.^ I have a LOT of work floating around here and there. I'm still asking myself why I chose this to my first impression on the writing community. Lol
@ButterflyBlu well regardless of how you might feel about the impression, I think it sends the message of an empassioned writer who has an understanding of the imagery she's working with.