KiraHitomi
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Chapter 1 "What is it? What is it?" A girl squirmed excited as her boyfriend held her valentines gift behind his back. " Just close your eyes and don't open them until I tell you to." Her, what seemed like boyfriend, said as he hold a Boque of roses hiding behind his back, and a box of chocolates in the other hand behind his back. "In 3....2....now!" He said holding out the gifts to her and she squealed with delight. I put my head phones over my ears trying to drown out the sound with my music. I guess it's about that time a year again. Where materialistic women desire for a man to buy them chocolates and flowers. While the male has no choice but to get it for her or he might as well have broken up with her. "Jiro.....Jiro.....Jiro!" I knew she was calling me, but I was too busy sketching this specimen that I found the other day. "Jiro!" She screamed slamming her hand down on the drawing and I looked up at her sighing and taking my head phones off leaving them around my neck. "What nanna...." I said and she was glaring at me. "What is the purpose of your face?" I asked and she scowled. " Angelica! You're late! Remeber! She sent you a note saying to meet her behind the sch-" "I have class, and I'm not interested in her 1990s communication." "That doesn't matter! It's Valentine's Day! Do you know how cruel that is?" "Nan-" "Come on!" She growled snatching my arm leaving my stuff there as she ran through the hallway and down the stairs to the exit that would take us behind the school. There was a girl with light blue hair and blue eyes. She was called the school angel for her Angel like voice and innocent like reputation. "Jiro...." She breathed shocked as Nanna pushed me hard making me almost fall before finding my balance and straightening up. I'm going to have to remember to sneak one of my specimens into her food later today. "J-Jiro here....this is for you." I looked at the little box of chocolates. "I-i love you. S-so would you please be my valentine!" She said making me cringe at the loud noise she made. I sighed." You don't love me. Your infatuated by my appearance, or maybe more of something of admiration, or even something as low as lust." I finally said. Her face was heating up. "Jiro! You can't just say things like that! Jerk!" Nanna yelled punching me in the back of the head. "You know aggression is used for someone who cannot explain how they feel calmly, because they can't control their emotions." I said and Nana made a fist at me before Angelica spoke up again. "Jiro, I don't know what you would think th-" "Easy....because the emotion love does not exist." Her eyes widened. "Jiro st-" "I'll prove it to you! I don't know what girl hurt your heart, or what you've been through, but I'll find some way to prove it to you! I promise!" She yelled before running off, and shook her head as the bell rang out first class being over. " For someone who's so smart....you really are an idiot." "Idiot?" I scoffed walking back to class. It's not like I feel like I'm right about everything, but I know I'm right about this. Love doesn't exist. There's no such thing as a soul mate or love at first sight. These are just made up scenarios. That's why it's so easy for someone to move on after there wife died or when they broke up with someone. You can't be sad about something being gone that was never there in the first place. "I'm the idiot? They're the ones who belies in something that doesn't exist." I mumbled. So there's the first chapter! Here's the link to the rest of the story! Link: http://w.tt/1XJBoMe
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@SierraNichols thanks! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of it!
@KiraHitomi I didn't compare it to twilight ;-; hahaha but seriously though you write some really good stuff I like it
@Alletaire you're thinking of my romantic comedy You think Jiro is like hatchiman? Hahaha Thankyou. That makes up for calling my work twighlight yesterday XD
I give it 10/10. Its really good. You give the protaganists feelings through his words really good
It reminds me of.... Oh god I can't remember the name... Where this guy and two girls have a club in school and they help people? And the guy is like really anti social
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