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So.. there may be some things in here people font like, bare with me. it gets better!
"Yah! Wait! Can you at least show me around the school?" He asked. I sighed and turned around. "Look, Namjoon, I don't know if you've noticed this, but I don't like people, and I especially don't like talking to them. And I'm considered the bad boy of the school except female." I slammed my locker closed and walked off. I looked behind myself to see if Namjoon was following me. He just stood in shock as I walked off. I tapped my pocket that held a box of cigarettes. I pulled out the box, dropping a picture of my family. Before I could glance at it, I quickly snatched it up; I'm not going to think about family... not right now, at least. I snuck around the front of the school, making sure that no teachers were walking around. I pulled a lighter out of my back pocket, as I twirled the stick in between my fingers. I opened the school doors, and took a deep breath in; inhaling the cool fall air. I looked around the school yard, thank god no one was there. I pushed the cigarette up to my lips and cupped my hand so I could light the stick. I leaned against the tree and sighed. Not a care in the world could keep me away from this peace. Just then, I heard the leaves behind me crack. I quickly shoved the lighter in my pocket and dropped the cigarette to the ground; stepping on the tip to extinguish it. "Hah, I told you she would be here!" A guy laughed as he stepped in front of me. I recognized that voice immediately; "Yah, what do you want Chul?" I got up and shoved my hands in my pockets. Chul chuckled and crossed his arms, "You should know, since you're so smart." He snapped his fingers and 4 guys popped out and pinned me to the tree. "What the hell are you doing?! Chul, let me go! NOW!" I squirmed as he got closer; unsure of what was going to happen next. He placed his hand on my chin, and forced me to look up at him. "I'll tell you what I'm doing, I'm getting rid of you, so we don't have to deal with your crap." Chul backed up and kicked me square in the stomach. The impact on my stomach caused me to gag and reel forward. Both of the guys who were holding my arms tightened their grip and held me up tighter; exposing my quickly bruising stomach once again. Blood gushed out of my mouth with each kick. I smiled sinisterly, "You're totally going to pay for this.. Chul." I said as I coughed up more blood. "Oh don't worry, I don't think I will." He smirked and kicked me in the stomach again. I gaged, coughing up even more blood. Crap, if I take another hit like this- the wound is going to- I was cut off by a loud voice, "LEAVE HER ALONE!" I tried to turn around, but before I could, the guy came up and punched Chul in the face. The guys who held my arms suddenly let go and I fell to the ground. "W-who the hell are you?!" The guy to my right asked. It's Namjoon! Before Namjoon could say his name, I had kicked them both in the leg, causing them to fall and groan. "Who the hell are you people and why were you picking on Hyeon-ssi?" Namjoon's voice was low, and vicious. "None of your freakin’ business! I could-" I cut him off abruptly. "Well that's too bad, because I was going to let you off with a warning...!" As I finished that sentence, I kneed him straight in the face, knocking him out. "Woah, Hyeon, you have some amazing skills!" Namjoon cheered. His attitude was so different compared to when he was fighting. I couldn't answer him. In fact, I couldn't stand. I had lost so much blood that my legs gave out. No, no, no! Not now! Please don't be open! I started panting hard clutching my stomach. My white shirt had now turned to a red crimson color. Crap... I lost a lot of blood. "Hyeon-ssi? Are you okay? Do you need to see the school-" I cut him off. "No! Look, just take me home, I'll give you directions, just TAKE ME HOME NOW!" I shouted. He looked at me confused, "But, we're still at school... how can I take you home?" "The teacher's here are dumb. They leave the gates unlocked, so just push them open." I stated. Please last a little longer...
oooh cliff hanger I dig it. Toward the end there's a gaged that should be gagged. I'll try to take another look later but it's much more descriptive so good job! And semicolons yay ^_^ Not as choppy and reads a bit better
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow....that's a tough girl!!! can't wait to see what happens next
Loving this story more please
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