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This is my first time writing a fanfic and I'm not a writer, so have mercy on me. Summary: You go to Korea with your friend, Julie, and your younger sister, Jasmine, to meet up with your future-brother-in-law, that serves in the army. You only have a week to enjoy South Korea, what can possibly happen in one week?
I get on the airplane heading to South Korea, Julie and Jasmine aren't sitting next to me because I HAD to get the cheapest seats. Julie was sitting with a granny and her grandson; who looks to be same age as her, since they are chatting a lot. Jasmine is sitting next to a young mother with her 8 year-old son. I look around seeing people still trying to settle down, I see a short woman trying to put her luggage up in the cabin. I get up, thinking might as well use my 5 feet 9 inches to some use. I grab her luggage and put it away, I earn a smile and a thank you from the woman, I give her a smile as a return. I go back down to sit, when I see a young man sitting near the window seat. I lean over to tap him on his shoulder, my face is close to his face, I can see myself in his eyes and then he smiles at me. I'm taken aback by his cute face but then I recover my composure and I ask him, "I'm sorry, can I see your ticket? I think I have the window seat." He says, " Oh, I'm sorry. I like the window seat, so I can rest my head on it." I think about it and I say, "That's okay, you can have it." I get nudged by some really tall guy. "Umm, excuse me, can I get to my seat, please?" I stand tall and he's still taller than me, he's got to be at least, 6 feet 3. "Sorry," I said, "I'm going to sit down now." I'm sitting between two guys, for at least 19 hours, my lucky day. The window guy has his earbuds in and so does the other guy. Leaves me nothing to do but to read a book. After the Pilot informs us of take off, it's 5 am, and I'm already tired. I hate being cold but since both guys were next to me, they radiated so much warmth, that I was catching myself doze off. I just couldn't fight it anymore, so I brought down, moomoo. My stuffed cow that I've had for 9 years. I made it be my neck pillow. I was dreaming that I was back home on a summer night in my bed, surrounded by my pillows. I was woken up by the turbulence and I looked up groggily to see an amused face looking at me. "If you keep looking at me like that, I might just kiss you..." The really tall guy arches his eyebrow and I look down and I see that I'm holding his left arm between my chest and his hand is between my knees. I gasped and let go of it all together, and I see him rubbing his hands together, to get his blood circulation going. I peer up, to look at him. 'He's not that bad looking, although he looks pretty mad when he looks serious.' That's what I was thinking, when he turns to look at me. I quickly look away and I blush because I thought for a second that he heard me. "You want a picture, it'll last longer." He laughs, which I find kinda cute. I said no thanks and he clutched his heart and pretended that he was hurt, which made me laugh and he said, "You look cute when you smile like that." I said, "Thank you for the compliment... can I ask you something personal?" "Sure." "How tall are you?" He looks at me like, is that what you wanted to ask?. But then he says, "I'm 6"2 and you?" I told him and he said "Wow, your pretty tall. In Korea, many girls are around 5"5. Oh by the way, my name is Kris. What's yours?" "My name is Jinny," I said, "it can be pronounced as Jin-Hee or Jin-Yi." " How old are you?" He asks me. "I"m 23, I was born on December 4th, 1992." "So you are actually 25 in Korea. Chanyeol is 25, too, I think? lemme check." I looked at him confused and he leans over me and nudges the sleeping window-guy. He looks up and asks, "What, Kris?" "How old are you?" "I'm 25, since my birthday is November 27, 1992." I gasped and both of them just looked at me. Kris asked me if I was ok? I said, " Yeah, I'm fine but," I point at Chanyeol, "I was supposed to be born that day, but my mother said I was so lazy that I stayed another week and they had to push me out because I could have died." Chanyeol looks at me and gives me a cute smile and says, "Then, that makes me your Oppa." Kris looks at Chanyeol and then me, says,"I'm her Oppa too." They were looking at me to see who I would call Oppa first. I opened my mouth, when the intercom says that we will be arriving in 5 hours. " I should get some sleep, that way I'll be able to function when we land." They both nodded. I looked towards Julie and Jasmine, they are both knocked out cold. I lay my head against the head rest and close my eyes, drifting to sleep, I hear someone say, "Watch out, Jinny, I don't know what I'll do if you hug me like last time."
So, this is my first fanfic, please let me know what you think and I'll improve. Here's part 2: http://www.vingle.net/posts/1370160
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tag me please~ This is really good!
Oohh Please tag me?
Oh I love it!!!!
For a true beginner you are good . You really can write . Its a simple scene but can strap me to my seat when reading your story !
@aliahwhbmida thank you so much for your lovely observation. I'll keep you tagged on future stories