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Jiyong tried to hold him off, but couldn't hold long enough. The guy laughs at his face. *No, no* The knife got closer and it starts to cut his neck, Jiyong feels the fresh blood running down his neck. Jen-ho was fighting with another man. He tried to cut her but she kept avoiding it. Then she smacked the guys hand which made him drop the knife. He goes after her and grabs her hair and smacked her across the face. She was getting scared. Then she saw Jiyong fighting for his life. *Jiyong.. no no Jiyong* The guy started to choke her. She weezes and tried to ripp apart his hands from her neck, but he is too strong. Then she saw the knife which he dropped. She reaches for it, stretching her arm and fingers out to get the knife. The choking starts to hurt, but she got the knife. Then she close her eyes and quickly stabbed the guys ears. The guy screams in pain and she rolls to the side, trying to catch air. Then anger build inside of her. She stands and went towards the guy and pull the knife out of his ear. Jen-ho runs towards Jiyong. She goes behind the guy and she lift the knife and starts stabbing the guy over and over and over. She starts crying as she kept on stabbing. Jiyong grabs Jen-ho and pulls her back from him. "JEN-HO!! Relax , you got him." She looks at him and then looks at her hands, all she see is blood. She panicks and tried to take of the blood with her clothes and she tears up. "Oh my god... no. no. ... " "Shhh, its ok. He deserves it" Jiyong hugs her and tried to comfort her. She then collapsed. "Where's my baby, Jiyong. I want my baby. I can't lose her. She is the only thing I have from you." "We won't loose her, I promise this time." "We?" "yes WE. I ain't loosing my family this time. " Jen-ho looks deep into his eyes and she saw his honesty. They both got closer. Jiyong holds her cheeks and he kiss her lips softly, taking her into those beautiful moments they had before.
"Yo love birds, come here!!" Jiyong and Jen-ho walk towards Jack. They all see a hidden cabin with four guys guarding the door. "Jiyong remember that $100 trick" "ya, what about it" "When men are hungry of greed, they fall for it" Jack pulls out a $100. "Let's do this" Jiyong smiles. Jiyong took his shirt out and starts ripping it apart, then he saw strings of thread from the clothing. He pulls till its long enough. Then Jack tied one end to the $100. "Time to play boys." Jack grabs the $100 and starts walking quietly towards the guys. Then he slowly walked away. Jack picks up a twick and snapped it. The guys turns around and they look down and saw the $100. Jiyong starts pulling slowly, they follow the money. Jiyong kept pulling and pulling until they fell into their trap. Once they walked into their trap, Jiyong stops pulling. One of the guys pick up the money. They in smiles. "You guys ready to spend that happen o$100?". The guys turn around. Jack then quickly grabbed his knife and quickly stabbed the guys in seconds. "WWWOOOOO... That shit always work man." "Jack, ..." "What?" "Your fucking awesome" Jiyong gives a pat on Jack's shoulder. "Ya I know, its why you too attached to me" Jack smile. "Don't push it" Jiyong smacks the back of his head. Jack laughs. Then they go to the cabin and saw the door open a little bit. They all go in. Then all of a sudden someone closed the door and lock it from the outside. Someone threw a smoke bomb from the chimney. They all cough till they fell asleep.
*Mommy!!! Help me mom* Jin-ho is still in the dark room. She tried to go back into the dream she had with her mother. Then a door open. She saw light. Her heart races. He enters. She crawl herself into a ball. *please don't hurt me, please don't hurt me, plea..* "ahhhhhhhh!!" Jin-ho screams. The stepfather grabs her hair and drags her out of the room. She starts to scream because of the pain. "Let me go, let me go!!" She cried and begged for him to let her go. Then he throws her to a corner. "Time for story, Jin-ho" He lights up a cigarette, and blows the smoke at her face. She coughs and cover her mouth and nose. "Once a upon a time, your mommy had sex with your father and had a little brat name Jin-ho. But the father left and never saw the brat. So the brat grew up without him. Till one day daddy is home. The End." He then looks at Jin-ho and he saw that she covering her face. "I found your daddy, Jin-ho" "What?" "Yup, and he's been in front of your face this whole entire time." "I don't...I don't know what your talking about?" "Jiyong is your father" Her eyes starts to get watery. She couldn't believe what she just heard. "No. that's not true. He would've told me!!" "Of course he won't tell you, your a brat. And he don't need a little like you in his way." He is trying to make her hate Jiyong. And its working. Jin-ho felt sad but was getting a little angry. *No, its not true, its not true, its not true* She keeps repeating it over and over in her head as she rocks her self while she covers her ears and eyes shut. "He don't care about you, Jin-ho. If he did he would've been with you since you was a baby. But nope, he rather leave you away from him" Jin-ho starts to cry.
Jack wakes up and his hand is tied up, including his ankles to the chair. He saw Jiyong and Jen-ho tied up as well. Jack starts to look around. *Shit* He saw knifes and bags on a corner. *Hell to fucking no. They ain't cutting me apart like a pig!* He starts to twist his hands around. Then use the strength of his ankle and lift himself up a little and with so much force, he slammed down till the chair broke. He got himself untied. He runs to Jiyong and Jen-ho, but they won't wake up. *I'll be right back Jiyong* He starts to look around and he grabs a hammer * you look fun* he said himself to the hammer. He saw the door which was unlocked. He sneaks out and starts to quietly walk around. He sees another door and he enters quickly. As he turns around he saw three men standing in front of him. "Hey what's up, I didn't knew this was a hang out. Seems legit. Just need some refreshments." Then be attacks them with the hammer. He finishes then quickly. "I'm loving you" He kisses the hammer. Then he looks around the room. He opens a closet. And he sees a screen with five different screens. One: Jiyong and Jen-ho tied up *Not me hehe* Two: A group of men gambling. *Dafug, I wanna play too* Three: The cabin Four: The entrance of the building *Oh there's Jiyong's car* He points at the TV. Five: He sees Jin-ho *BINGO* As he was looking at Jin-ho, and he see's her rocking back and forth. *Awww, don't worry sweety. Uncle Jack to the rescue.* Then the door of the room opens and the guy hold a riffle in front him. *Oh damn it* Then jack gets hit at the back of his head. He blacks out.
Jiyong opens his eyes. Then he saw Jen-ho in front of him. "Jen-ho? Jen-ho? wake up baby!". She wakes up and saw Jiyong in front of her. Her eyes got wide open. "What ,, what's wrong" "He is right behind you!" Jiyong looks at Jen-ho, and he saw how terrified she is. Then he appeared. "Finally, I got what I wanted". He walks towards Jen-ho. He grabs her cheeks and squeeze them together. "Let her go!" "Why should I, she is my woman. Not yours." Then he pulls her hair back, and she squealed. She was getting scared. Then he slaps her face. "Stop!" The guy slaps her over and over and over again. Jiyong squirmed so much, he couldn't see Jen-ho in pain no more. "I Said STOPP!!" "why? She deserves to be a treated like a dog. " "Do not touch her" But he didn't listen. He then rips Jen-ho's shirt, leaving her with just a bra. She starts to cry. "No please , dont do this. No no no" He then started to touch her breast. While he is doing this, he didn't noticed that Jiyong's the chair was about to break. Jiyong was angry. Then his chair broke. Jiyong quickly got up and with his hands tied together he hit the guys face. He then covers Jen-ho with his body. "You bastard" the guy said as he wiped his lips. He saw he is bleeding. "You see this control. I put a chip bomb into her stomach. Just one push of this buttons, she will be blown into pieces. Is that what you want. " "No, not my baby! Please." "Then let's switch. Let me have my dog and you take the brat" "Never. You won't get none of my ladies." "As you wish" He then snapped his fingers. Two guys starts to hit Jiyong. They kicked him and throw punches at him. Jiyong can't do much with his hands tied. Kick after kick and punches after punches. "Stop , no stop it. Fine I'll go with you. just please let Jin-ho, Jiyong and Jack go." "Deal" Jiyong can only see blurry images but he heard what Jen-ho did. He sees him taking her black out. Then he see's a hallway, black out. After he was thrown on the streets, black out. A policemen and a medic picked him up, then he blacked out.
Where's Jen-ho now? What happened to Jin-ho and Jack? How will Jiyong get Jen-ho back. ? PREVIEW THE BEGINNING MEETING JIN-HO WITH HER HIDDEN WORDS RESULTS ONE WAY MEMORIES TESTED TRAPPED BIT HIT (PREVIEW) @SabrinaSakura @amberg171997 @BrittanyBell @VeronicaArtino @UnnieCakesAli @AmberRelynn @lilbr0wneyes @btsgotshinee @dayashley11 @JuanitaBooRiv @Maddie27 @MadAndrea @AkashBhojraj @ClaudiaCastro @CarenBoyKins @felicityautum @BekiKunstman @OliviaEdwards @DeniseiaGardner @SamariaAllen @NickySerban @SaraHanna @Helixx @amullins2007 @karinamiranda81 @JohannaTlatench @MissT615 @KarenGuerra93 @KaylaStokes @JayDay @JennyKool @xroyalreisx @lovelyashley91 @laylabehnia @KpopQueenaBee @summerblack2 @SugaMint @tiffany1922 @ParkHwaYoung @TaliaMay14 @Kieuseru @anarose @Shellyfuentes70 @CreeTheOtaku @destiny1419 @DominiqueThomas @kpopandkimchi @ToppDogg @Lizzeh @Jiyongixoxo @nekoheart @Maddie27 @KwonOfAKind @SugaOnTop @catchyacrayon @amobigbang @marisamusic @CallMeMsDragon @TeaeraHarrell @DekaraMiller @Helixx @ladygdragon @JackieG1617 @thatkdramalover @AristaJ @glo86 @B1A4BTS5ever @GDsGF @palaguachie21 @saraortiz2002 @ZitaMahoney @Adetoro @SarahVanDorn @ItatiSanchez @loftonc16 @DominiqueThomas @megancurrent9 @KarolinaTrevino @camrynchemy @DeniseiaGardner @Defy24601@MyalsNotSexy @nightshade18 @NasihaOcasio @brirodriguez412 @Ticasensei @ArielaPicazo @lovetopia @thePinkPrincess @Kpossible4250 @LenaBlackRose @SamariaAllen @amberg171997 @BrandyJones @QueenLele @glo86 @BekiKunstman @VIPforever123 @JasmineWilliams @CarenBoyKins @3SecondsOfHope @woahdersierra @SaraHanna @SaiT @Ercurrent @thePinkPrincess @drummergirl691 @MorleeCorielus @NickySerban @MarrickeJ33 @katyng52 @Kpopmom@JadeOwens @obiterdictum @kpopbunny9 @VatcheeAfandi99 @MsLoyalHeart @JinsPrincess86 @maatiCasanova @amullins2007 @BTS282236 @Craze4Haylu @jjrockstar @maddiedo @obiterdictum @ravenblackwell @MikaLewis @aliahwhbmida @justcallmekyki @cthulu @ZwankimaWalker @hmelodie @Lilith24 @SydneyLstrange @MelissaGarza @bettytolliver @SandaraGrimaldo @mellyortiz @Lizzeh @ChavaBerry @SindyHernandez @NicoleJolly @SusiBosshammer @AdiaJasinski @alecram27 @JessicaEvaristo @LaurenDimalanta @YunBao @reyestiny93 @LizaNightshade @screamoparadise @CrystalGuerra @KoreanDramaMaMa @ShellyVargas @harukachihan
man so many feeling going on right now. I can't believe that dick stepfather he needs to die. I love uncle Jack "this looks fun" takes hammer and does some damage. @BBxGD can't wait for next part this story is pretty intense I'm loving it 💙💙
@Kira9404 sure thing. also follow the card. there's another story I finished
Tag me in the second part plz
Jack is something else lol
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