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You were at your house getting ready to go somewhereYou get dressed and head towards the door. You were out and start walking to your destination. while you were walking you see your friends at the coffee shop. So you decided to go and join them. You sat down and started talking to them but then you were getting hungry so you walk over and go order something to eat. when you got your food you hadded it in your hand and was walking back to the table where your friends were at. You were walking slowly and not looking where you were going because you hadded a cup of coffee in your hand and kept your eye on it so it wouldnt fall. You looked up to see where you were and how far you were from the table and look back at the coffee.
When you looked at your coffee you heard the bells ring from the door whenever someone enters and you didnt bother to look so you just kept on walking until someone bumped into you. The coffee in your hand that was in your hand was now all in your clothes. "hey watch where your..." you looked up then saw it was a very handsome man 鈥渙h im soo sorry! " the guy said as he walked to go get some napkins to wipe you off as he grabbed the napkind you set the food down and dryed yourself off "i..its okay i shouldve been watched where i was going" you said as the guy wiped you off he then kept on apologizing "are you okay (y/n)?" your friends said as they walked to you "yeah im fine"
"im so sorry " he said to you while you giggled "what happened do i have some on myself too?" "no i just find it cute how you keep on apologizing " "oh " he said shyly "well whats your name ? " "(y/n) my name is (y/n)" "thats a beautiful name (y/n) and my name is jeon jungkook" "well i have to go & im soo sorry... again... but heres my number if you want to hang out sometime" "oh sure and its okay you dont have to keep apologizing" you said as you gigled while wipping yourself off with the napkins "well i got to go now and just call me or text me anytime " "okay bye" you went home and took ashower where you coildnt stop thinking about
that was part one of my fanfic about jungkookie and its my first one and idk how i did so please tell me if its okay @kpopandkimchi @mrsjunghoseok @sarahdarwish can you please tag other people if you think its good and tell me if you want to be tagged or not
What do you all think? 馃槉 @emealia @bambamisbae @JessicaEvaristo @Ercurrent @amooon13eg @RinaBea @RinaBea @NEOisRealo @terenailyn @VikaAlex @LaurenDimalanta @Vixxstarlight1 @dchapple45 @vlargo @myylifeisnow @jessicacheung97 @loftonc16 @lunastormnoona @StaceyNguyen @drummergirl691 @MyriamMadla98 @DonnaLykaRoxas @DasiaB @abby177 @KarlythePanda66 @cutiecookie @Baekyeol27 @Msrayray95 @evieevelyn @megancurrent9 @aishwaryashrest @MsLoyalHeart @IsisMayaVelasco @Jocelynne03 @LizbethOrtega @HaleyLamoureux @Helixx @PrettieeEmm @VKookie47 @bbyitskatie @QueenLele @yaya12 @Valerie816 @SarahVanDorn @roseeoh @Allyson3333 @AshleyAndino @merryjayne13 @KaylinJones @GossamoKewen95 @JadeOwens @TracyLynnn @dlphn100grl @SugalessJams @kelseyblair @jojojordy2324 @MichelleIbarra @SusiBosshammer @MelissaGarza @shelbiisonfire @DeyaniraEstrada @AuraKyoshiro @FalseLove @KaeliShearer @roseeoh @BTS34443 @taisiakaps90 @elizabeth1234 @shashae5296@chelaurenh @AshleyAndino @ninjamidori @KaeliShearer @UnnieCakesAli @kelseyblair @aishwaryashrest @FalseLove @Kpossible4250 @shelbiisonfire @KaikaiKpop @OliviaZenger @myylifeisnow @VeronicaArtino @Elaynethtrumpet @chelaurenh @MelissaGarza @nancycappa @HurdKpop @HappyLulie @ChelestiEdwards @jojojordy2324 @DeyaniraEstrada @Eliortiz13 @MichelleIbarra @alltimerejectx @merryjayne13 @MsLoyalHeart @Gaehwa @VIPFreak2NE1 @QueenLele @KaylinJones @KpopQueenaBee @Valerie816 @SugalessJams @jen19gar93 @BAbrajan1 @Starbell808 @LenaBlackRose @SusiBosshammer @TracyLynnn @CrystalGuerra @AuraKyoshiro @JessicaFigueroa @Journ505 @evieevelyn @PrettieeEmm @JadeOwens @MalihaAhmed @CamrynCherry @DasiaB @fionafifimonkey @meggie68 @KpopQueenaBee @jellybeanlov3 @DenieceSuit @EWillsea @KarlythePanda66 @DanaMichelle @aishaaakp @amooon13eg @bambamisbae @yaya12 @midnightskieslo @NinaLlama @amandamuska @Jessicalista @JoseCullen @lunastormnoona @addri @GossamoKewen95 @justcallmekyki @MauriciaVilla @BrookeLane05 @CarlaPacheco @Eliortiz13 @alycabrera18 @aishaaakp @JessicaFigueroa @Valerie816 @VikaAlex @kcastaneda170 @Konnor @SunnaWalo @SunnaWalo @KarlythePanda66 @ParkMinRin13 @Jinnyrod3 @KendraReeve @EniorehFrancois @FraireMelanie @letsloveshinee @KiinLyr @CristinBarnes @mjenifferjm9 @DawanaMason @HerosBells @saraortiz2002 @merryjayne13 @MelinaHernandez @AshleyAmancio @CarlaAcosta @FraireMelanie @MomoChamie @Keniaaxox @merryjayne13 @carolinacastane @amberg171997 @JasmineGregory @annapearlgale @JasmineGregory @NiahriTaylor @BiakKu @SarahVanDorn @priscy513 @SierraBecerra @SarahIvester @FraireMelanie @loftonc16 @midnightskieslo @ShellyVargas @SindyHernandez @cue2pal @KellyOConnor @gyapittman @bnrenchilada @thekreviewer @BTS282236 @Jojo89 @Sankeerthana @AdrianaCortes @FraireMelanie @aleciaLOVES @Dreamer1004 @KoreanDramaMaMa @EliseB @SunnaWalo @JessicaFigueroa @PatriciaS @SindyHernandez @justcallmekyki @DancingPotato @thekreviewer @SarahIvester @FraireMelanie @loftonc16 @midnightskieslo @AhiramRobledo @Defy24601 @PrincessMeulin @justcallmekyki @maddiedo @funfunbunbun @Orihemay @GamerKyumin @raenel @karinajune1017 @EniorehFrancois @MonkeyLee08 @FraireMelanie @oanh99 @KarolinaTrevino @shelby101 @tinathellama @Brawner13 @LizbethOrtega @tiffany1922 @VikaAlex @ChavaBerry @PizzaPanda19 @BtsIsLife @viviano6 @summerblack2 @ILikeHisFace123 @jjrockstar @MichelleMonroe @Claudyyy @BridgetJara @ShailaZaman @RinaBea @LizbethOrtega @JeniseRamos @oanh99 @krystalrikpop @BaekYeolBaby @viviano6 @conversehigh @SamanthaAcosta @SummerFranz @KatieSemon @HayleyEastman @KierstinAndrews @crazychikki @DawanaMason @JaclynGuajardo @aliahwhbmida
Its a pretty good start to a cute story. Few grammer errors but not really anything that detracts from the story. Feel free to tag me in the future.
The story itself is good. Seems to have a good story line/plot. Just watch those capitalizations and punctuation marks, other than that you're good. Feel free to tag me in the next one 馃榿
@sarahdarwish @MrsJungHoseok Yh you're right I also think its cute tag me in future episodes!
@SamanthaAcosta @gyapittman @Orihemay @Jinnyrod3 @aliahwhbmida @ParkMinRin13 @BridgetJara @JessicaFigueroa i will make sure to tag and thank you all for making me want to go on with my fanfic 馃槱馃槉馃挊
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