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Krystalstar22
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Agent Krystal Chapter 19/?
Welcome everyone to another installment of the fan fiction prequel to Captain Criminal minds! Thank you all for liking this so much and helping me so much! I adore you all! :D
When Raven headed home, it was raining. Her pretty makeup had been smudged by all her crying and the rain, but she was stll beautiful in her wedding dress. Everyone else was asleep in the mansion, so she creeped in unnoticed, knocking lightly on JJ's door. JJ was a light sleeper, always had been. "Coming...." he muttered sleepily, opening the door to find a waterlogged Raven. He had to rub his eyes to believe what he was seeing. He hadn't thought she would come back, let alone so quickly. Raven smiled softly and shyly, but you could see the intense guilt in her eyes. She knew she'd hurt him very deeply. Her words came out unsure as she looked up at him. "Jamie, can we talk?"
JJ nodded. "Of course Raerae, but lets you get dried off before you catch cold." he told her with a soft smile as he let her in, worry evident in his eyes. He didn't want her to get sick, even if he were fully qualified to take care of her. He just wanted her to be comfortable. JJ handed her a towel as he started to pull off her wedding dress. "The quicker you get out of the wet clothes the better" he intrucked. getting her out of the wet dress and into his nice warm plush robe. He sat her down, sitting b across from her next to the fire. This might be a long talk, but it needed to be said.
JJ crossed his legs as he sat in the chair, letting out a soft sigh. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have pushed you so quickly into marriage. that was stupid of me. Its just that I love you so much, and I want us to be together forever. Marriage seemed like the right step." he explained softly, and she would be able to tell by the look in his eyes that he really thought that it was his fault. She had hurt him, yes, but he blamed himself. Raven shook her head. "No Jamie, it's me who should apoligize. I shouldn't have run out like I did. I'm sorry I hurt you." she replied, taking his hands and giving her a soft kiss. He had already forgiven her for what she did, and just needed to know that she still loved him too.
Raven siged softly that conveyed her emotional overload. "I do love you, Jamie. more than anything, and I'm sorry. You forgive me right?" she asked, eyes looking kind of afraid of the answer. JJ walked over to her pulling her into his arms, and kissing her passionately. "I forgave you the moment you left. I love you, Raerae. Please, stay with me." he whispered, stroking her cheek softly.
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yay!
2 years ago·Reply
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it's pretty good!
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YAY HAPPINESS
2 years ago·Reply
@shannonI5 Yep! i think the next one will be a time skip. I have ideas.... hee.
2 years ago·Reply
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lol i can hardly wait
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