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Flash! Jiyong saw himself walking on a train road. He starts to look around. He walked forward where the train track is leading him. As he approached to a hill, he starts to look down. Flowers and trees with delicious fruits was everywhere. He walks towards the trees. He starts to eat some apples and oranges. Then someone behind him tap his shoulder. He looks up and it was Jen-ho. Jiyong stands quickly and blinks a couple times to make sure she is Jen-ho. "Its me Jiyong." "Oh god. I thought I lost you" "I'm ok." They both smile. Jiyong grabbed her hands and they both start to walk where the flowers are. They laughed. They missed being together. Jiyong lifts her up in the sky and she looks up and close her eyes, as she stretch her arms out. Then he put her down. "Oh Jen-ho, you have no idea how much I miss this." "I miss this too" "why you pushed me away?" "I was scared, and I wanted to give you a life." "you are my life, Jen-ho. Also Jin-ho Now. You should've trust me and told me. None of this would've happened to you" "I'm sorry" "Don't cry. I promise to put your heart together and whole again" Jiyong grabs her cheeks and pull her towards his lips. He passionately kiss her. Her arms goes around his neck and Jiyong lifts her up, and her legs around his waist. He holds her tight. He then starts kissing her neck, and she moaned a little. As he was kissing and bitting her neck, her body starts to feel the fire. She holds tight and her mind starts to loose control. Then Jiyong slowly puts her down in the grass. He looks at her eyes and he sees the most beautiful woman he missed in years. Jen-ho saw how Jiyong is looking at her, but all she sees is fire and hunger in his eyes. She smiles at him and he smiles back. "I want to keep going, but my heart feels weak" "Its time Jiyong" "I will find you my love" "I will be waiting" Flash!
The machines starts to go back to a normal pattern beep. Then Jiyong opened his eyes. The doctors wasn't prepared to see that. They checked his eyes and saw that his heart is beating faster. Then they start to take the tube out of his mouth. Once the tube is out he coughed hard and missing the fresh air. "Can you here Mr.Kwon" "Yes, I need water." "Sure, any pain." "What happened" "You at the hospital, you was stabbed three times and one sent to your chest. You died on me twice, but your here. Your heart seems to go back to a normal. Which is a great sign. We will see how you progress. Your a miracle Mr. Kwon." The doctor left and the nurse gives him water. The nurse looks at Jiyong .. "Sir?" "yes?" "There's a little girl crying for you outside" *Jin-ho!* "please bring her in." "With honor sir!" The nurse leaves and walks towards Jin-ho and Jack. "Everything is fine. he is back, and he is also awake." "Can we see him please?" "You may."
Jin-ho let go off Jack's hand and starts running towards Jiyong's room. She quickly opens the door. "Daddy?" Jiyong's heart skipped a beat hearing those words. A word which will warm his heart. Jin-ho saw him and he smiles at her. She starts to tear up, and runs towards him! "Daddy!! Daddy!!" She runs and hugs him tight. "Its ok, I'm here. Don't cry, everything will be ok.!" "Don't leave me no more." "I won't, I will be standing right beside you" Jiyong hugs her tight and not caring about the pain from the cut wound. Then Jack walks in. "You mother fucker! You scared the shit out of me" "Language man!" "Sorry, but for real. you did.!" "Aww,, do you need a hug?" "Man, don't push it." Jack looks at Jiyong and Jiyong opened his arms. Then Jack smiles. "Yes, I need hug. I thought I lost my brother" "Punk!" They all laugh.
Jen-ho is tied up to a pole. She is a room which is cold and wet. She can't see nothing, she is blindfold. All she heard is water dripping. Then a door opened, and she quickly holds on the pole. Jen-ho hears footsteps walking towards her. Her body starts to shake, she even bit her lips so she won't whine. Then get hair got pulled back. The pain made her screamed a little. "What should I do to you now?" He spokes. Then he starts to touch her ass. Jen-ho tears started to fill in. "Why you crying? We've done this many times". "please, stop. I don't want this no more. Don't do this." He didn't listen. Then he grabs her pants and pull it down, and she was just left with her panties. She starts to cry. He starts to rip her shirt off, and she couldn't handle it no more. "Don't.. please.. no. Don't touch me, I don't want this." "Bitch, shut up. I will do what I want." He slaps her face, and then he starts to touch her all over her body. She feels disgusted of him touching her this way. He never stopped. "No no no no. stop stop." *Jiyong, help me*
Jiyong was later discharged from the hospital after a few days being in the hospital. He is really determined to find Jen-ho and put that guy into his grave. "Jack anything about Jen-ho?" "Nah, man. My guys been searching since we was at the hospital but nothing." "Damn it. We gonna have to search somewhere, but Jin-ho has to come with us." "Why?" "We going to where they used to live " They both agreed and took Jin-ho with them. As they arrived at the house, Jin-ho froze. "Its ok Jin-ho, I got you. Let's go see if we can find any clues. ok?" Jin-ho shook her head and agreed to go in. The door was locked and Jack grabbed two pins from Jin-ho hair and unlocked the door. "You got no shame huh!" Jiyong laughed. "Nope, proud of my past!" Jacks grins. They enter the house, and it was still a mess. Glass everywhere, broken frames and plates. Jack went to the basement to find anything. Jiyong send Jin-ho to pack some of her stuff she wants to take out here, and Jiyong checked Jen-ho's room. Jack went inside the basement. It was remodeled, doesn't look like a basement. Its a small bar with a huge set of liqour and wine. *Damnnn, I can hang here* He goes behind the bar, and started looking at the bottles, then he spotted something. He moves a bottle of vodka and behind it, there's a paper. As he open it, he saw it was a list. •Kill Jin-ho •Drug Jen-ho •Get plane tickets •Live a new life "What the fuck!!! This dude is some sick fuck. And I thought I'm crazy!?" Jack goes running up stairs to Jiyong. "Yo, Jiyong!" "In here man" Jack enters where Jiyong is. Jiyong is holding a baby book. Inside he sees Jemho pregnant and the ultrasound of Jin-ho. Jiyong then turned the page. There he see's a picture of Jin-ho born. Jiyong felt sad *How much I missed" he thought to himself. He closes the book and put it aside to take it with him. Jack gives him the paper he found. "plane ticket, but to where?" "I know where daddy. We always plan to go to Jeju Island. My stepfather has a house over there." "See i told you she can be handy" "Smart kids ,bro" "Jin-ho do you where the house is?" "Ya we've been there multiple times, then it stopped when he became mean." "Ok everyone. let's get out passport ready. Jeju island it is." "Awsomme,, finally away from Seoul" Jack jumps up and down, then Jiyong smacks the back of his head. "Owww, dafug bro?" "We going to get Jen-ho, not a damn vacation." "Buzz kill"
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hey everyone.!!!! Imma take a brake today. after 15 hours of work.... ya I'm dead 😦 just giving you all a heads up. but please tell me your feedback of the story. what you would what to know. (not what will happen) lol @SabrinaSakura @amberg171997 @BrittanyBell @VeronicaArtino @UnnieCakesAli @AmberRelynn @lilbr0wneyes @btsgotshinee @dayashley11 @JuanitaBooRiv @Maddie27 @MadAndrea @AkashBhojraj @ClaudiaCastro @CarenBoyKins @felicityautum @BekiKunstman @OliviaEdwards @DeniseiaGardner @SamariaAllen @NickySerban @SaraHanna @Helixx @amullins2007 @karinamiranda81 @JohannaTlatench @MissT615 @KarenGuerra93 @Kira9404 @KaylaStokes @JayDay @JennyKool @xroyalreisx @lovelyashley91 @laylabehnia @KpopQueenaBee @summerblack2 @SugaMint @tiffany1922 @ParkHwaYoung @TaliaMay14 @Kieuseru @anarose @Shellyfuentes70 @CreeTheOtaku @destiny1419 @DominiqueThomas @kpopandkimchi @ToppDogg @Lizzeh @Jiyongixoxo @nekoheart @Maddie27 @KwonOfAKind @SugaOnTop @catchyacrayon @amobigbang @marisamusic @CallMeMsDragon @TeaeraHarrell @DekaraMiller @Helixx @ladygdragon @JackieG1617 @thatkdramalover @AristaJ @glo86 @B1A4BTS5ever @GDsGF @palaguachie21 @saraortiz2002 @ZitaMahoney @Adetoro @SarahVanDorn @ItatiSanchez @loftonc16 @DominiqueThomas @megancurrent9 @KarolinaTrevino @camrynchemy @DeniseiaGardner @Defy24601@MyalsNotSexy @nightshade18 @NasihaOcasio @brirodriguez412 @Ticasensei @ArielaPicazo @lovetopia @thePinkPrincess @Kpossible4250 @LenaBlackRose @SamariaAllen @amberg171997 @BrandyJones @QueenLele @glo86 @BekiKunstman @VIPforever123 @JasmineWilliams @CarenBoyKins @3SecondsOfHope @woahdersierra @SaraHanna @SaiT @Ercurrent @thePinkPrincess @drummergirl691 @MorleeCorielus @NickySerban @MarrickeJ33 @katyng52 @Kpopmom@JadeOwens @obiterdictum @kpopbunny9 @VatcheeAfandi99 @MsLoyalHeart @JinsPrincess86 @maatiCasanova @amullins2007 @BTS282236 @Craze4Haylu @jjrockstar @maddiedo @obiterdictum @ravenblackwell @MikaLewis @aliahwhbmida @justcallmekyki @cthulu @ZwankimaWalker @hmelodie @Lilith24 @SydneyLstrange @MelissaGarza @bettytolliver @SandaraGrimaldo @mellyortiz @Lizzeh @ChavaBerry @SindyHernandez @NicoleJolly @SusiBosshammer @AdiaJasinski @alecram27 @JessicaEvaristo @LaurenDimalanta @YunBao @reyestiny93 @LizaNightshade @screamoparadise @CrystalGuerra @KoreanDramaMaMa @ShellyVargas @harukachihan
i want jack...can i keep him haha
@MarrickeJ33 I will think about if I should add a story about the stepfather. or a passage on a story.
@BBXGD I know how you feel. Take a well needed rest, you absolutely deserve it. Honestly, I would want to know why the stepfather is such an asshole... I love the story just how it is 😁
The story was awesome as always!! Take a break, don't worry about us we'll be waiting patiently!!!
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