EXOahjummafan
2 years ago5,000+ Views
Avoid "Telling" Writing
I think in my own writing, I did this a lot. Vague descriptions but I did so because I always told myself I would go back and re-write it properly. I was in the 'I'm on a roll, I'll come back to it later' mode.
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Cool this helps a lot all fifth graders have to do a district speech thing so maybe I can pass now
2 years ago·Reply
So much better to show the people! I always try to include a little atmosphere in my writing, helps me feel like I'm telling the story better.
2 years ago·Reply
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