MarinaKarina
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Our Promises
Hello! :) so, I wrote a story called "Out Promises" (obviously) but I just wanted to put it here in case people might enjoy this story ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡ ) I guess you can say it's just a little sample of the story that I'm writing on Wattpad (☞゚ヮ゚)☞ So without further ado, enjoy and leave a comment of what you thought of it. Thanks for reading. Hye's POV: I loved the feeling of the wind hitting my face. Especially when I ride my long board. It's dark out and I shouldn't be out this late, but my parents are once again arguing about something that I don't want involve myself in. I looked around to see if any cars or people were coming since I didn't want to accidentally crash into them. I may not be going extremely fast, but it's fast enough to leave at least a minor injury. I got distracted and didn't notice someone turn a corner. By the time me and that person realized what was about to happen; it was too late. I crashed into that person and both fell down. The person managed to catch himself, but I kept falling. I fell down on the cold and hard concrete. I stayed in that position; not wanting to move and feel the pain. "I'm so sorry! I didn't see you coming, Jesus. Should I call a ambulance?" His voice sounded kinda girlish, but it was calming. I heard him shuffle around. I sat up slowly and groaned. "Jeez, that hurt." "Oh! Thank god you're alive." He wiped away at his forehead and I chuckled. I felt pain shoot up in my left ankle and I flinched. I bent down a little in order to pull up my pants a little. It was scraped and bleeding. I sighed. "That looks serious. Can I offer you to help in any way?" The guy asked. I looked up at him and then froze when our eyes meet. It was as if time stopped. He didn't say anything either. We just stared into each other's eyes. His chocolate colored eyes were beautiful in the moonlight. I felt my breath hitch and butterflies in my stomach. Jimin's POV: She cleared her throat but that didn't stop me from staring into her beautiful grey eyes. Although the moons light was hitting only directly on me it still made her eyes twinkle. They were like a grey colored jewels. I was mesmerized. "Uh" she said. I snapped out of my trance. "Uh, sorry. A-Are you okay? Should I take you to the hospital?" She shook her head and gave me a genuine smile. God, her smile can make someone's bad day into a good one. "I'm fine. Are you okay though? You didn't fall, but I'm just making sure." I shook my head and she sighed out of relief. She turned around to grab her long board but flinched as she applied pressure on her scraped ankle. "Hey, I don't live far from here. I can bandage that scrape if you want." I watched her bend down and grab her long board before turning to look at me. "It's fine. I'm used to this actually. I can get distracted when I'm on my long board and I always end up on the floor" she scratched the back of her head in embarrassment and laughed nervously.  I chuckled. "I can't leave you like this." She stared at me. She pursed her lips in thought and then nodded. "Okay. Thank you, uh, what's your name?" "Jimin. Park Jimin" I said stretching out a hand for her to shake. She looked at my hand and then shook it. "Funny, my name is Park Hye." I raised a eyebrow and smiled. "Maybe we're relatives" I said. She giggled and shook her head. "I would know. I'm close to my relatives." I nodded my head still smiling. "My house is that way. Here." I went to one knee with my back facing her. Hye's POV: Jimin went down on one knee and his back was facing me. "A-Ah, I'm fine. I can walk-" "Nope, I won't let you. A very beautiful lady is injured and shouldn't be walking on a scraped ankle." My heart skipped a beat when he called me beautiful. I cleared my throat awkwardly. "A-Alright." I got on top of his back and he stood up. He picked up my long board and walked forward. My heart was racing and I was scared he could hear it. Or maybe even feel my racing heart on his back, but I couldn't help it. I can feel his broad back and he smelled like cologne that made my heart race even faster. I took a breath in and then released. I tried to calm myself down by distracting myself from him, but nothing worked. "We're here" he said. I turned to look and saw a beautiful house. It was big and I was certain this guy was rich or something. He opened the gates and then proceeded to walk up the stairs. He easily got his keys and opened the door. I immediately hear other voices coming from, what I was sure, was the living room. It got closer to us as Jimin put me down and I took off my shoes. He did the same, but he was attacked by 6 other people. "Yah, did you buy my gummy worms?" A man with green hair said as he continued to grab hold of his leg. The others talked at once and clung onto him like leeches. I held back my laugh as Jimin sighed. He turned to look at me and smiled. They seemed oddly familiar to me but nothing came into mind. "Guys, do you not see that we have a guest?" Jimin said. The other 6 guys turned to look at me and smiled widely; except for the green haired one. He continued to cling onto Jimin's leg. Seeing their faces made me realize that these guys were BTS. "Oh, you guys are BTS, right?" I asked. They seemed to get tense at my words and pursed their lips. Knowing what they might be afraid of; I spoke up. "Don't worry. I don't plan on causing a scene or tell anyone where you guys live." The tense atmosphere washed away as if it was never there. A man with a nice smile came up to me. "Sorry, we thought you were one of those over obsessive fans. I'm Jin by the way. The oldest person in this household." "Nice to meet you Jin. It's honestly fine. Being an Idol probably isn't easy." Jin nodded and sighed. "I'm Yoongi, but they call me Suga. I'm the second oldest." I turned to look at Yoongi, and as I thought. Even if Jimin was standing up he was still clinging onto Jimin's leg. "Hello! I'm your hope! I'm your Angel! I'm J-Hope! But my real name his Hoseok. I'm the third oldest." I giggled at his introduction. "Yo, I'm Namjoon, but they call me Rap Monster or just RM for short. Fourth oldest." "As you know, I'm Jimin. I'm the fifth oldest. Me and Taehyung were born on the same year" he said pointing at a guy who's smile was adorable. "I'm Taehyung, but my nickname is V, which stands for victory. I'm the sixth oldest." Finally the last one came up to me and smiled. "I'm Jungkook, but these hyungs call me kookie. I'm the maknae in this group," he sighed, "sadly." I laughed at what he said at the end. I turned towards the guys and bowed. "My name is Hye." They made a 'O' shape with their mouths and smiled. "Very pretty name for a very pretty girl" Namjoon said. I blushed. "Thank you." It got silent when the guys turned to look at Jimin. "Um, if I may ask, why'd you bring a stranger? No offense" Jin said immediately after what he said. I smiled. "It's fine. Actually, we both ran into each other, but I was riding on my long board. He managed to catch himself, but I fell and scraped my knee. He offered me to bandage my scrap and I didn't want to be a burden so I declined but he kept offering. So I took up on that offer." They nodded their heads. Yoongi let go of Jimin's leg and walked over to me. He measured our height and I stood there awkwardly. After a while, he chuckled. "You're so small." I looked over at him and also chuckled. "Compared to everyone else, besides Jimin, he's also kinda small; you're a smaller height that the rest of them." "Oooh, take that Yoongi!" Rap monster said while laughing. Yoongi looked back at me and smiled. "I like this small one. You have the honor of being my servant" he said. I laughed and then stopped only to shake my head. The others chuckled. Jimin came closer to Yoongi and measured their height. I realized that it was still late and had to hurry back home. "Ah, I just realized that it's late. I have to go. See you guys around!" I grabbed my long board and headed towards the door. "Wait, what about your scraped ankle?" Jimin asked. "I'm sorry, but I have to go." I opened the door and ran out of the house. Even if my scrape was stinging I still needed to head back home quickly because in the morning in order for me to keep going on in life; I need to go get checked out by a doctor tomorrow. Jimin's POV: I watched her run until she was out of my sight. I went back in the house and went into the living room to sit down on the couch. "That girl was pretty" Hoseok said. I nodded and smiled. "I still didn't get my gummy worms" Yoongi mumbled. I rolled my eyes. "Hyung, I'll get you loads of them when I go to the store next time." Yoongi smiled happily, "sounds good to me." I chuckled and paid attention to the TV. Until Jin sat down next to me. I turned to look at him. I raised a eyebrow. "What is it hyung?" "Jimin, next time you can't go around and bring strangers to the house. Yeah, she's a nice girl but you would've never known if she was a over obsessive fan. Be careful next time, alright?" I nodded and apologized. Jin smiled and stood back up only to enter the kitchen. I looked down at the ground and thought about Hye. She was beautiful. Her grey eyes that still somehow shined in the dark. Her smile. Her laugh. I felt like I could trust her, and so I did. She really is the girl of my dreams.                                         *** The next morning I woke up to go to the store and buy Yoongi those gummy worms that I promised him. I got up and picked out clothes. I headed downstairs and I sighed. I looked in the kitchen and only saw Jin cooking. "Ill be right back hyung." "Where are you going?" Jin asked. "Gotta go buy Yoongi those gummy worms before he wakes up and complains about it for the rest of the day." Jin nodded and then proceeded to tell me to be careful especially around fans. I walked out of the house and felt the nice breeze today. I put on my hat and sunglasses, and walked forward to the store.                                          *** Once I stepped inside the store the door made a beeping noise indicating that another customer entered. Obviously. I looked around for the "special" gummy worms for Yoongi. He literally puts up an attitude if you don't get the right kind of gummy worms. He says the other gummy worms don't have enough swag. I sighed as I continued to look for them when I bumped into a girl. She fell backwards but I grabbed her by the hand and managed to stop her from falling. "Thank you" she said. I looked at the girl; recognizing her voice. "Oh, Hye" I said. She turned to look at me. It took her a while to notice it was me. When she did notice her face brightened up and smiled. "Sorry, I didn't recognize you for a second, but your bright orange hair gave it away." I chuckled. She continued to look at my hair. She giggled. I raised a eyebrow. "What is it?" "You just look like a tangerine head." I laughed with her and reached to touch my hair and fix it. "You have no idea how many of the army's and the guys make fun of me because of my hair color. I don't mind anyways. I also find it funny."  She nodded her head. I watched as she put a strand of her hair back behind her ear. She looked at me with those eyes. But now in daylight, they look even more mesmerizing. I cleared my throat. Just then I remembered. "That's right. Can I get your number?" She thought for a while before nodding with a smile. I passed her my phone and she typed in her number. Once she gave it back, I thanked her. "I have to go, but let's hang out sometime." I nodded and she turned to walk away. I watched her until she was out of the doors. I congratulated myself for getting a girls number and then sighed heavily. Realizing that Yoongi's favorite pack of gummy worms were out of stock. I face palmed myself. "I'm never going to hear the end of this."
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@AbbyRamey thank you very much 😊 and its "Suga_Infiresman"
2 years ago·Reply
any chance there will be a part 2?
2 years ago·Reply
@lopleaf19 There is, I was about to post the second chapter a while ago. But I was a little busy today so I forgot to post it 😅
2 years ago·Reply
My Wattpad is screwed up so I can't comment on your story but I really like it so far! :")
2 years ago·Reply
@AbbyRamey thank you so much ☺️ I'm glad you liked it
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