jealousshota
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part 2
the girl bolted out the door in a slouching manner. she looked left and hopelessly to the right as she tries to figure out which way the boy would've disappeared to. she started to Iean to the right. their was a long strip of a rugged and cracked road which lead infinitely into new corners and hidden streets. she looked to the left and notice that the street lights keep flickering on and off in the darkness. the only sounds she could hear was her own crying voice wispering in the empty void of darkness around her. the girl returned to the empty house of the boy and started searching through the destroyed and disorderly arranged room. she searched the desk that the note was on and opened a few draws to see if their was a clue to his sudden disappearance. the girl searched thoroughly ,but found nothing but scrambled up notes and the letters Al. Wait that's my name. my name is Al and I'm 16 years old. Al continued to search the room. she looked under the boys bed and pulled out a few porno mags. her face got completely red and she threw them across the room. Papers started to fly anywhere and everywhere. a single paper flew over and landed in her lap. Al says "why was that under their?" she slowly picks up the paper and examined its content "well this is interesting" she said as she stood up. the light bulb starts to flicker and decided to go out. she decises to pull out her cellphone and uses the flashlight app. she slowly walks towards the door avoiding every peice of paper that flew out of the porno mag (like she really cares what happens to them) and heads for the kitchen. she turns the lights on and she's that the kitchen was destroyed as well. she looks from one side and slowly turns her head and looks towards the other side. The fridge was tiped over and the counter doors were busted. the table was broken and it looked like someone was put through it. the table legs were broken off and were spread all over the room. Al takes a step forward and notices that the floor is covered in broken peices of glass. she looks up and she sees that the Chandelier is missing every single peice except for three. the tv was completely shattered and the couches were completely torn and sherred. Al notices that the smell in the house started to change. she walks to the furnace room and closes the door and notices that the furnace was kicking on. She discovered that the room was getting to an adnormal temperature. she reaches for the door that she shut and it's stuck. she notices that the door was catching fire.
okay readers this is the second part of the story. if you want to be tagged in the next one let me know and if your enjoying the story show me some love and feedback. throwing in your thoughts and what you think might happen is something that I want you guys to do and hopefully you guys can have a conversation and decide what's going to happen next. Any advice would be appreciated as well so I hope you enjoy it and I'm sorry it took awhile guys. @CrazyOtaku3 @TheRedWolf35 @PASCUASIO @silverfang @lorettaHon @AlexisUlloa @kimmieSama @kainaFox @shinoa143 @KageTsuki040910
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nice job 馃槺馃槏 a twisted story love it. Thank for tagging :3 please do tag me next time.
a year agoReply
Nice job on adding a description to the back ground helps a lot to show how the house looks like around the girl. Can't wait for the next part dude
a year agoReply
tag me too please @jealousshota
a year agoReply
You HAVE to tag me... Plz?
a year agoReply
tag me. but next time proof read or get someone to do that for you.
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