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~Promise~ Broken Glass PT. II/ I Need You
Hey everyone! Here is the long awaited chapter that you all have been waiting for. We took a break due to the girls @LocoForJiyong @PandaqueenBee and @dayashley11 coming to Cali to come visit. Mature content and language ahead. I hope you are all ready.
THE SCREECHING SOUND OF TIRES. SOUND OF METAL CLASHING. GLASS SHATTERING. SCREAMS. Everything happened so fast. Ashley screaming for me to look out and when I looked to my left all I could see were headlights coming straight at us. I reached my arm to hold Ashley back so she wouldn't be hurt as bad. But we ended up flipping until the car came to a stop. The last thing I could see was Ashley passed out next to me and everything went dark. ************************************* Sirens. Hazy faces. Machines beeping. Fuzzy voices. Everything was spinning and moving so fast. I tried to listen to what they were asking and respond but my mind and body wouldn't let me before I passed out again. Ashley's Dream What a beautiful sunset. Couples out holding hands, smiling and laughing. They all look so happy. Then I see it. It looked like a snow flurry until I realise that its the cherry blossoms falling from the tree. This seems so familiar as though I have been here before. I turn in circles until I feel a hand stopping me. When I look up, I see these beautiful brown eyes looking down at me and smiling like a 5 year old, who just won the biggest prize of their life.... But now I remember. It was the day Simon gave me my promise ring. I remember seeing that beautiful face until I see that I'm looking up at a man with a mask on his face asking me questions and all I could say was his name. Simon. Simon Dominic
As we proceed to the hospital the EMTs keep hearing a phone ring they answer it in the hopes that this person may know who we are. "Hey baby. I just wanted to make sure you got home okay." "Hello sir" "Who is this? Why do you have my girl's phone" "Sir there has been an accident. May I ask who you are to this young lady?" "I'm Dok2 and I'm her boyfriend. What do you mean there has been an accident?" "A car ran a red light and hit the vehicle that your girlfriend was in. We are on our way to Seoul General Hospital. If you know who her guardian is please call them. And also the guardian for her friend" "Her friend?!.. ASHLEY!!!!" I get up and get dressed. I knew today was Simon's wedding but Reis needed to know what was going on. But so did Jay, Simon and Flow. I called Flow on my way to the church and finally got there in time enough to catch Jay. "Jay" I said out of breath "Yo why you out of breath and what are you doing here?" "We have to go. The girls got into a car accident and they won't tell me anything. We need to leave NOW!" "What do you mean?! What do you mean they were in an accident?!?" Simon walks in and hears some of the conversation "Dok2 what's going on?! I'm about to get married so I don't....." "Marricke' and Ashley have been in accident. I don't know how bad or if they're okay. They won't tell me anything. I just know that they are headed to Seoul General Hospital" Before I could finish catching my breath Simon was off running to his car to head in the direction to the hospital. Simon's Perspective Without thinking, I began to run out of the church towards my car. I'm so stupid. The dream. The uneasy feeling something and was going to happen. My God I can't believe this. I hope the girls are okay. But I need Ashley to be okay. I have to tell her how I really feel. I can't believe that it took this for me to realize that she is who and what I needed all this time. "Simon. Simon. Where are you going?" I turn around to see Reis and Duck coming out of the church as I'm getting ready to leave. "Reis. Its Marricke' and Ashley. There's been an accident and they are being rushed to the hospital right now!" "Woah wait a minute. What the hell you mean they were in an accident? I just saw them a couple of hours ago?!" "Reis I don't know anything more than you or anyone else here. But what I do know is that we need to go."
"Lets go" Reis Perspective I hope in the car with Simon and Duck and we speed off towards the hospital with the Jay, Dok2 and the rest of AOMG following behind. We all just sat there in silence. I know we all had to be thinking the same thing. Will they make it? Are they okay? How hurt are they? The more these thoughts raced through my head, the more I could feel the tension in my body. I began to shake and started pressing my hands together to keep from losing it. Duck reached over and grabbed my hands. "Babe, they're going to be okay alright. You know them better than anyone. These girls don't give up without a fight, so don't you either." I just looked at him and nodded my head because he was right, they are fighters. The rest of the ride I sat there looking out the window fighting back the tears pooling in my eyes. Please let them be okay. We finally arrived at Seoul General Hospital emergency room. We decided to head to he counter to see if the girls had arrived. But before we could get there we see two EMTs coming in with stretchers and two girls on them saying that they were involved in a car accident and that two more were on the way. It wasn't Ashley and M. Jay turns around to ask the nurse behind the counter "Excuse have to ladies come in by the names of Ashley and Marricke'?" "Let me check.... No I don't have anyone by those names here. Are you sure that they're coming here?" "Yes. We were told......" "I need help here. I have two female victims both with multiple injuries." We all turned to look and realized that it was Ashley and M. It was like something from a movie watching my home girls hooked up to machines with blood covering the both of them. "Oh my God. No!" Dok2 said as he and Jay both tried to run over to Marricke'. "No. No this can't be them" Simon said as he and I tried to go over to Ashley. The doctors pushed us back so we couldn't go with them. We tried so hard to push back. "Let me go. That's my girl right there!!" Dok2 said. "Yo, get your hands off of me." "Hey you need to let me back there aight, they're family" "I just wanted to see her. I just want to see Ashley." With all the commotion the doctor's called security to get us to calm down. "Look I understand how you all feel right now. But right now I need to worry about those two girls and give them the best care possible, okay. They have some very serious injuries and I need to know who their guardians are for Ashley and Marricke'. Its going to be a long night. Both girls were rushed right into surgery. While they continue i need some information from the guardians so that I can go into the surgeon room prepared for anything." "I'm Ashley's guardian" Jay said walking forward. "I'm Marricke's guardian" I said walking forward. "Alright now let me get some information from the both of you. Everyone else please just hang in there." Jay and I went with the doctor and as I looked around I could see the worried looks on everyone faces. Simon semi collapsed against the nearest wall, letting it hold him up as he stood there with tears in his eyes. Dok2 had his face held down with his hat covering his face so I couldn't see. Both of their loves having to face a different or same fate. Not only that but Jay was still in love with Marricke' also. I took a deep breath and let it out before I turned to follow the doctor. Please... Just please help them to survive.
The doctor's progressed with the surgery. One hour went by. Two hours then three. After 4 hours, the doctor's who were operating on Ashley finally came out "The surgery for Ashley went well. She had some minor cuts and some broken bones. But most importantly we were able to repair her stomach and the cut that's as made. The damage was not extensive. She is a very lucky girl. Now she is still on ICU and will need her rest but I will allow one visitor to stay with her. Who will it be?" "I will" Simon said as he stepped forward. Jay patted him on his shoulder. "Alright then, I will take you to her" the doctor said. "I know that you are all also waiting for Marricke', I have not heard news on her surgery, but I will be sure to find out for you." We all just nodded and said thank you. Simon's Perspective Beeping machines. Heart monitors. I have never seen her like this. She looks so vulnerable, I thought with tears falling from my eyes. Oh my God. Ashley.. I fell to my knees as I walked into the room to see her lying there hooked up to every machine imaginable. She had soo many cuts and bruises on her head. I walked over to her bedside and sat down beside her. I reached for her hand and hesitated but grabbed hers and put them in mine. All I could say was "Please let her survive. I need her in my life. She is my life. I promise that if she survives I will be the man she deserves and nothing less." As I wait by Ashley's side, I can't help but wonder how M is doing. Better yet how Dok2 and Jay are taking it. They both fell in love with the same girl.
Jay's Perspective Before I walked into the room, I took a deep breath to calm my nerves. I pushed down on the handle and walked in. There she was. Just lying there. I inched forward as I heard the heart monitor beeping and the respirator breathing for her. I reached her and took my hand and brushed it across her cheek.  Tears started to fall from my eyes as I couldn't hold it in anymore. "Marricke'.... I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry that this happened to you. You shouldn't be here." I grabbed her hand and just watched her. "I'm sorry for everything that has happened between us. I never wanted us to end like this. I never meant to hurt you. I.. I was afraid. I was afraid of being in a committed relationship and that's why I did what I did. I know that I shouldn't have and it was the worst mistake of my life because in the end I ended up losing my lover and my best friend. If I could take it all back I would, especially if it means that I wouldn't have to see you like this. I would switch places with you in a heartbeat. Please. Please forgive me, Marricke'." Before I left, I stood up and leaned down to place my forehead on hers then gave her a kiss on the cheek. Dok2's Perspective Jay walks out of the room and places a hand on my shoulder "Hey bro look when you go in there just.... Just remember that it is her." All I could do was nod my head and walked away in silence to go into the room. I walked into the room and could hear all of the monitors beeping. The room was so still and silent and dark. It's missing her liveliness. That beautiful smile that can light up a room or that dorky laugh that she has. I walked right over to her bed and sat down right bedside her. I took her hand and held it in mine looking it over as I enclosed our hands together. "Hey baby girl. Looks like you had a pretty rough day today huh? You scared the life out of me, but I know you must be more scared than any of us right now. But right now, I need you to be strong. You have so many people waiting for you to come back and rooting for you. You have been through so much and you deserve to be happy. I know you can do this. I know I sound selfish right now, but I finally found the person I want to spend the rest of my life with and its you! So baby girl I need you to pull through aight. Just please be okay... I... I LOVE YOU."
Before I knew it her heart monitor started to beep and it became more erratic and then... flat. I yelled out the door for a doctor or nurse to come. They came rushing in with crash carts and told me that I had to leave while they worked on her. Jay came over, "yo what happened?!" he asked. "I don't know. I was just talking to her and I told her that I loved her and all of a sudden her heart monitor started going crazy. All I know is, is that she can't. She can't die Jay." Meanwhile in the room.... "Charge it to 50. Ready, set and clear" I could feel a jolt of electricity running through my body. "No her heart still isn't back." "Charge to 150. Ready set clear." More electricity going through my body. "Come on. Don't you die on me. You have family and friends out there waiting for you. I k ow you're a strong young lady so FIGHT!" "Charge to 250 joules. Ready, set clear!" "It's not working doctor." The doctor started pumping my heart with his hands. But the screen on the monitor would not change. The sound of the machine flat lining. It just kept ringing and ringing and ringing. They grabbed his arms to pull him back so he could stop. Time of death 10:45 p.m. They turned off all of the monitors. "TIME TO REVEAL THE NEWS"
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5 comments
😱😭😭😭 stupid car accident.I feel super bad for dok2 and jay
a year ago·Reply
@dayashley11 Right! especially Dok2 who just fell in love and finally got her. Then Jay who just messed up altogether and misses his best friend and lover 😞😞😞😭😭😭
a year ago
omg that makes me so sad
a year ago·Reply
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@twistedlove yea exactly
a year ago
😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
a year ago·Reply
😞😞😰😰😰
a year ago
MARRICKE! HOW COULD YOU! 😭😭😭😭
a year ago·Reply
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@pandaqueenbee I guess you'll have to wait for the next chapter
a year ago
ALL BECAUSE YOU COULDN'T PICK A HOE 😭😭😭
a year ago·Reply
Who was I with in the end?! That was my choice
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