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Alrighty I'm finally posting after the new update...I was waiting till they fixed the things I didn't like but it doesn't look they are gonna fix it anytime soon. here is the next story in my BTS one shots.


"Why are you breaking up with me?" He asked

"I'm sorry...I just think it's for the best." I said trying to hold back my tears.

"That's not an answer, do you not love me anymore?" He asked.

I nodded. I wasn't actually going to say I didn't love him. I loved him more than anything.

"I can't believe you. I love you and you just throw me away?"

I was on the verge of tears.

"I'm sorry." I said and turned and walked away. I wasn't going to let him watch me fall apart. I didn't want him to see me get destroyed so I left him. I didn't make it far before he ran up to be and hugged me from behind.

"I'm know you really do love me, I'll wait for you. I know you'll come back." He hugged me tight as a tear escaped my eyes. He let go and started walking away. I didn't turn around.

"Please don't wait for me." That was the last thing I said to him. It's been 2 weeks. I've stayed locked inside ever since. I didn't want to risk anyone seeing me. I had missed my chance to save myself and now I had to pay. I avoid the doctor at all costs and that's why they couldn't catch it in time. I was told I only had a month to two tops to live. I was walking down the hall and fell to my knees coughing. I started crying. Noone could help me I was a lost cause. Thinking of Jin made me cry. I missed him and hated the idea of never seeing him again. I stood up and walked to my room. I grabbed my phone. Jin had called. He must have sensed something. I stared at the picture displayed and threw the phone. The tears fell harder, I picked up anything close to me and threw it against a wall watching it shatter.

"Why did this happen to me!" I screamed out picking another item up and throwing it. I realized what I had broken was a picture of Jin and I. I walked over and started picking up the glass shards. I was still crying.

"Jin." I cried out and ended up cutting myself on a glass shard.

"Shit." That caused me to stop crying. I stood up and walked to the bathroom and washed my finger and put a bandaid on. I left the bathroom but leaned against the frame. I was really sleepy all of a sudden. I took a few breaths and rested my head against the frame. Then I fell to the ground.


I was running to her house. I didn't understand what was going on with her but all that I heard was enough to make me go see her. Even if she didn't want to see me. I couldn't give up on us. I got to the door and it was locked. I used my key and entered.

"(y/n)?" I called out but heard nothing. I made my way towards her room and that's when I saw her lying there on the floor.

"(y/n) are you ok! (y/n)" She wasn't answering. I quickly called 119 and they rushed her to the hospital. They hooked her up to some machines.

"Doctor how is she?" I asked

"Not so good."

"What's wrong with her?" I asked

"She has cancer. We caught it too late so we couldn't treat it. She had an estimated of 2 months to live."


"Right now it's all on her to wake up."

"Are you saying she is in a coma and has cancer?"

"That's what I'm saying young man."

"Can't you do a surgery while she's out to remove the cancer cells?"


I opened my eyes and realized I was still on the floor. It was morning. I guess it happened again where I passed out randomly. I stood up and went into the kitchen. Jin was there.

"Jin what are you doing here?"

"Why wouldn't I be here? We are married ya know." He smiled and walked towards me. He quickly wrapped his arm around my waist and pulled me close and pressed his lips to mine.

"How'd you sleep?" He asked

"I fell asleep on the floor." I said raising an eyebrow.

"That's funny." He laughed. "You slept next to me all night." He said letting go and going back to the stove. What happened? I swear I'm still sick.

"Jin I have cancer. " I stated bluntly.

"You used to yea. But then you got a surgery and thankfully it hasn't come back in 3 years."

What is going on?

"Mommy! Hae won is being mean to me." a little girl came running up to me and wrapping herself around my leg.

"Tattletale!" A little boy said walking into the room.

"Hae won stop picking on Mi cha." Jin said

"Mommy hold me please!" Mi cha said holding her hands up for me to grab her. I lifted her up. She had the perfect mixture of Jin and I. Did I really survive Cancer?

"Mommy what about me? I'm the baby" Hae won said. I smiled and picked him up along with Mi cha.

"My cuties." I walked over to Jin and kissed his cheek.

"I love you." He said smiling.

"I love you too." I took the kids to the living room and we played together until breakfast then the kids went with Tae for the evening. We spent another hour together before heading to bed. I cuddled into him and he kissed my forehead one more time before we said goodnight.

*Beep Beep beep *

Oh that annoying alarm. I groaned and opened my eyes. The room was different. It was white. I turned my head to my right there was no Jin. I sat up quickly and looked around. I was in a hospital bed. "Jin?" I said out loud. I looked around and all of a sudden the curtain moved. Jin was there.

"Oh (y/n) thank god your awake." He said hugging me. "What happened?" "You passed were in a coma for a few days." "Oh."

"Also I know about the Cancer." He said causing me to look down. "Oh."
"Why didn't you tell me?" "I....I didn't want you to watch me die." "(y/n) I will never watch you die." He place his lips on mine.
"But I have cancer." I pushed him away slightly. "You might be cancer free now." He smiled "That's impossible."
"While you were in your coma I convinced them to do the surgery. It went amazing. But they want you to have a check up to make sure it's gone."
"But they told me they caught it too late to be able to do anything." "Well I'm very good at convincing people to do things."

I ended up staying in the hospital for a few more days then they let me go home. Jin stayed with me because he was still worried. After my first check up when they said I was still cancer free Jin propose to me. I quickly said yes.


It's been a year of no cancer and we finally had our first child. We had a baby girl, we named her Mi cha. When Jin asked why I chose the name I said I had a dream about our children's names. It wasn't long before I was pregnant again and that one we found out would be a boy so we picked the name Hae won. To think that my dream really did come true made me happy.
Alrighty this took me forever to copy and paste...but I finally did who's next to be updated? only 2 left.

Wae!!!!!???!??!! Go on ahead and do the other Busan torture device
@SerenaArthurs @Orihemay @matty0203 yes she did survive. she woke up from a coma and got married to Jin. No second part to this one.
I love what I read so far. 😍😍Is there a part 2? I want to know what happened after Jin called 119.😳😳
What?! THAT WAS NOT A HAPPY ENDING! She died didn't she?...😭😭😭😭😭😭 y u do dis to me??? Jin!! ☹️☹️☹️ did she have cancer? Why did she die? Why didn't she tell Jin the truth?? ☹️☹️☹️☹️😫😫😫😫
So did she wake up?
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