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Alright So I am now a part of the House of Exctessy writing group. Although I don't feel my smut is good enough this will help me get better at it right?
Well I hope you all enjoy it and I'd love some feedback on it.

Fair Warning
Last Chance to back out
Alright if you are ready for this continue on.


I walked into the bathroom and stripped down. I wasn't feeling good so I thought the shower would help me. I hopped in and the heat did make me feel better. I closed my eyes and let the water hit my face. I heard the door open and close twice and was confused. I peeked out and let out a yelp.

"Oh my god you scared me." I put my hand on my chest.

"I'm sorry. I was going to ask if I could join?" Jimin was just in his boxers.

"Yeah come on in." I laughed. I can't believe he scared me without even trying. I backed up into the water and finished cleaning myself. When I was done he stepped in. I switched spots with him.

"You want to wash me?" He asked and I turned to face him. I tried not to look down, if I did I would blush like crazy.

"Sure." I smiled and grabbed his shampoo. Thinking about why he had some things here always made me smile. Sometimes after practice or working out instead of going back to the dorm he'd come here. I lathered up the shampoo in my hands and then went to town on his hair. I loved playing with his hair. He smiled at me.

"I think we should always shower together." He spoke

"Oh yeah so I do all the work?"

"Yeah, I'm just so burnt out after practice." He placed his hands on my hips. Electricity ran through me.

"Ok rinse." I pushed him lightly to put him under the water again. I helped clean him.

"Plus us showering together means more time together" he smiled

"True." I grabbed his body wash and started rubbing all over his body. When it came time to go below the waist I was ready to mess with him. I got on my knees and started lathering up his thighs with body wash. I looked up at him and he was staring down at me. I smirked and grabbed his member and started stroking. I soon switched to grab his balls and lather them up as well. I continued to look at him. He let out a ragged breath and I stood up again.

"Ok rinse." I smiled

"That was not fair." He said rinsing his body off.

"Well you wanted to be washed." I retorted. He quickly finished rinsing off and pinned me up against the wall.

"I'm going to make you beg for mercy." He said in his sexy voice. It sent shivers up my spin. He placed his lips on my neck and started sucking. While he did this one of his hands moved down to my core. He started with slowly rubbing my clit, which was making me want him more.

I bit his neck since it was staring straight at me. I sucked and moved my tongue around. I wanted so badly to leave a mark to claim him as mine, but couldn't. I moved one of my hands to run down his Smooth ripped muscles. I just loved touching them. He shivered from the light touching as I landed on his member and started to stroke him.

He started kissing down to my collarbone nipping my skin along the way. I gasped when he slipped one of his fingers into me at first being gentle then he ended up pumping fast and slipped another finger in.

"You're so wet." He spoke against my skin turning me on more.

"You do have that effect on me." I tried to say in my normal tone but failed. He laughed and pulled his fingers out. He then stuck his fingers in his mouth and clean my juices off of him.

"Mm you taste so good."

That was way too hot for me. I stopped pumping him. He quickly spun me around so I was facing the wall. He pushed me a bit to bend over and before I could say anything he pushed into me. I let out a moan.

"Oh baby moan for me again." He slammed into me and another moan came out of me.

"I love the sounds you make." He said breathily.

He started of slow and steady then started to pound faster.

"Harder." I moaned.

"Oh god." He said and started going harder. Him going hard he kept hitting the perfect spot.

"Rub your clit." He commanded and I did so. As he continued to ram into me I came closer and closer to my edge. Just a few more pounds and I let out a scream of pure bliss.

He kept going until my knees buckled and he pulled out. I turned around and quickly grabbed his thighs and pulled him closer to my face. I put my mouth around his hard cock and started sucking on him. I pulled back just enough.

"You were right I taste good."

"Oh god I want to cum all over that pretty little face of yours."

"But I want to swallow you all."

I took him in my mouth again and started to lick him like a lollipop. He moaned and gripped my head and started to make sure I would take him completely in my mouth. I fought the urge to gag and kept taking him to the back of my throat. I pushed back so I could swallow my saliva and he quickly took his cock in his hand and started rubbing himself. As I was catching my breath I would randomly lick the tip of his cock as he pumped himself.

"I'm about to cum" He said as he was getting close to his end. I quickly stuck my mouth over his tip as he pumped and then released his seed into my mouth and he let out a moan. Then he removed his hand and I took over. Pumping the rest of his seed into my mouth and swallowing. As I finished cleaning him up I backed up.

"You taste pretty amazing yourself ." I licked my lips

He turned around and shut the water off now that it was cold.

"I'm not done with you yet."

"Round 2?" I asked as I stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around myself.

"If you want to call it then, I'm just calling it a continuation. " He grabbed my hand and pulled me to the bedroom and tossed me onto the bed. The towel fell off revealed my naked body again and the look in his eyes said we wouldn't be getting any sleep tonight, then he went down to my center and started sucking and pushing his tongue into me. I grabbed the sheets and let out a moan. The feeling he was giving me was driving me crazy. He suddenly stopped licking my core and licked up my body. Slowly he would lick and kiss and move up towards my head. He stopped at my boobs and took one in one hand and placed his mouth over the other and started sucking. Another moan came out of me.

"God you turn me on so much." He said after releasing my nipple.

I was expecting more foreplay this time but he quickly pushed into me.

"I told you I'm going to make you beg for mercy."

I bit my lip the anticipation was starting to kill me. He slowly started moving in and out.

"I want you to scream so loud the neighbors get jealous."

He slowly moved in and out, taking his time to move back in causing me to get frustrated and buckle my hips so I slid him into me. He pulled back out.

"No!" I said and pushed him so I could roll over and be on top.

"I'm going to make you scream my name." I smirked.

He placed his hands on my hips as I started to ride him. I was setting a rhythm that he didn't like and he let out a frustrated breath. I placed my hands on his chest for stability and started moving faster. He moaned. Everytime I pressed him farther into me his moans would get louder.

"Say it Jimin." I breathily spoke.

"Oh god...(y/n)"

"Louder baby." I moved faster.

He let out a loud moan.

"OH FUCK (Y/N) I'M ABOUT TO CUM!" I slowed down my pace and pulled off of him. He whimpered.

"I thought I was suppose to beg...sounds like you're the one begging." I rolled off of him and was reaching for a condom. He rolled over and placed his hand on my arm stopping me.

"You're on the pill right?"


"Then let's not use one today."


"Hey." He kissed my neck. "If you got pregnant tonight because of this, I'd be fine with it." He continued to kiss my neck and snake his hand around my side and slipped his fingers into me again. I gasped.

"Please baby." He bit down. I lost it. I couldn't handle it anymore and rolled over to face him. I crashed my lips to his. Hungrily wanting to taste him. Our tongues battled over dominance and he won but I got to bite and suck on his lips. He got back on top of me this time placing one of my legs on his shoulder while the other was bent to hold my bottom up closer to him. He swiftly slammed into me and the positions we were in he kept hitting my g spot over and over. He kept pounding harder and harder. I couldn't contain the moans that were coming out of me. I put my hand in my mouth and bit down trying to stay quiet. Jimin didn't like that and pulled my hand away from my mouth.

"I want to hear all the noises you make."

"Oh..oh Jimin..." He started to slow down.

"No don't stop." I begged

With a smirk he slammed into me again causing the loudest scream of pleasure to come out of me.

"Fuck Jimin. " I exhaled.

"What was that?" He asked and did the same thing again.


The next few minutes was just the sound of us both moaning and finally as I was about to hit my climax he hit my spot one more time and finished inside me. The feel of his cum filling me threw me off the edge and I came as well. He collapsed on top of me as we both were catching our breaths. I rubbed his back as I was slowly coming down from my high.

After he caught his breath he rolled off of me and laid on his side facing me.

"That was amazing." He smirked.

"How is it possible that after what we did in the shower within 5 minutes you were ready for another go."

"You just have me wanting you so badly." He leaned forward and kissed my lips.

"Back at you." I Closed my eyes and took a deep breath.

"Do you think that was it?" He asked causing me to open my eyes and look at him.

"There's more?"

"Oh we have all night baby." He licked his lips and smirked at me.

It was going to be a long pleasurable night.”
Alright so what do you think????

-E Squad

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Damn tiger that was hot! It turned out really good, plus! Bonus! 2 Rounds!
damn .... this is one word to describe all of this
Bias wrecker jimin this is so good!
mind blown 😱😱😱😱👀
OH 💀
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