3 years ago
moya23
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Half of Me
Half of me needs a hand grabs mine...tenderly Half of me needs a shoulder to put my head on... peacefully Half of me needs arms to hug me as a whole...strongly and all of me need love to feel complete
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I really like the emotion that the final word of each line adds -- it's not just holding hands, but something tender. It's not just having someone near, but someone to be at peace with. And it's not just a hug, but something strong and secure. Great!
"and all of me need love to feel complete" I think we all feel this way. Really beautiful poem!