4 years ago5,000+ Views
Half of me needs a hand grabs mine...tenderly Half of me needs a shoulder to put my head on... peacefully Half of me needs arms to hug me as a whole...strongly and all of me need love to feel complete
The picture goes along with this perfectly. I love your writing!
Thank you... Yeah, I was inspired by the picture.
I really like the emotion that the final word of each line adds -- it's not just holding hands, but something tender. It's not just having someone near, but someone to be at peace with. And it's not just a hug, but something strong and secure. Great!
Yep, when you experience something you'll become more exppresive haha.
"and all of me need love to feel complete" I think we all feel this way. Really beautiful poem!