scottmitchell
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"Her eyes drew him in, deeply"... I like that verse it was beautiful.
correct me if I'm wrong (really please do), the words "parting is such sweet sorrow" seem to go with this.
"His thirst would be professed" this line carries his passion--and his fear of being revealed--so well. Great wording.
I completely agree @eMP3
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