scottmitchell
3 years ago5,000+ Views
The Key
5 comments
"His thirst would be professed" this line carries his passion--and his fear of being revealed--so well. Great wording.
3 years ago·Reply
"Her eyes drew him in, deeply"... I like that verse it was beautiful.
3 years ago·Reply
correct me if I'm wrong (really please do), the words "parting is such sweet sorrow" seem to go with this.
3 years ago·Reply
I completely agree @eMP3
3 years ago·Reply
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