3 years ago
Pureheart517
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some love poems i wrote just now Haha :p
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"every word so passive and effortless" this is definitely my favorite line
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I'm a fan of the rhyme scheme; not too regular but enough that I get an ebb and flow going that I can fall into as I read.
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(p.s. I still find it a bit jarring to read in this format, though! Still, great poem. @Pureheart517)
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@greggr thank you, im sorry for the font i know it's a pain sometimes
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@Pureheart517 It's alright; maybe consider doing a copy paste from your notepad to Vingle when you add the card? It might be easier for my eyes to read then. Anyways, I enjoyed the read.
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