3 years ago
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At first I thought I needed you. At first I thought You were everything. At first I thought We were in love. But I am strong. But You are gone. But We don't know each other anymore. Now I know I only need myself. Now I know You are nothing. Now I know We were never meant to be.
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Funny how you think you can't live without someone until you have to live without them... This was simply beautiful.
3 years ago·Reply
@DanielRivera This is similar to the style I was thinking about when I read your poem--adding some white space to change the impact of the lines! @GeorgeJensenJr I like the progress of time throughout this poem, and like Daniel, you use repetition quite well. Beautiful words in there, too.
3 years ago·Reply