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I sit beside you, you dont know I notice all the small things you do. One day ill tell you, I'll fill your heart with the words I know you want, and I'll fill your heart with all the love I think you need. I will ask you one day, for your hand in marriage. You will say yes. I will be the happiest man on the planet as I try to make you the happiest woman on the planet.
I really like the tender emotions in this piece!
You should make a collections specifically for your creative pieces, and put it into creative writing! That way more people who like it can find it :) Anyways, nice start. I like the simple, perhaps naive hope in this one: it feels like nothing could go wrong.
Short, but nice beginnings: I can feel the start of your exploration of using language to express specific feelings. Looking forward to reading more!