Gilbert09
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She was my queen my only girl But then you came along into my world She was number one The only one But then you came along and brought your love I was all hers and she was all mine but then you came along and you took a place in my mind and with the passing time I fell for you like I did for her I promised myself I wouldn't do this anymore the Broken dreams The Broken hearts The hearts that have been lead on The crash I had with reality was head on When you came along.
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"The crash I had with reality was head on" - I absolutely love this line
@Gilbert09 Great! I hope that means we'll be seeing more of your work in the future.
Wow, what a complication of emotions! It beautifully expresses the way that we love: not always just one person, but sometimes more, and sometimes the way we love one person is mirrored in the next. Great exploration of love @Gilbert09
@Gilbert09 Fantastic! Looking forward to it.
@galinda thank you.
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