3 years ago
Destinynot190
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Hope full
Roses are colored. Flowers have bloomed. The sun comes out, and is followed by moon. So close to your heart it's beating in tune. We'll be together forever and soon.
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I instantly read this to the typical rhythm of roses are red, violets are blue, because of the first line. Was that intentional?
3 years ago·Reply
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@hikaymm, Growing up I heard a lot of common poetry, especially with the tune you describe, I guess you're right I find myself singing different lyrics also to certain tunes.I need to try to explore my own rhythm. Thanks for the insight.
3 years ago·Reply
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Hope full and full of hope: I like the play on the "common poetry" rhyme!
3 years ago·Reply
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@Destinynot190 All good work starts in imitation, I think :) Excited to see what else you come up with!
3 years ago·Reply