Nedyah
3 years ago1,000+ Views
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I love when my face is against your neck when we're cuddling. When I open my eyes and I see the light shining through the cracks in your hair like the suns rays piercing through the clouds on a slightly overcast day. Its is so beautiful. So arresting. You're so breathtaking and so wonderful.
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Just a quick note; that first were should be "we are" or "we're." The image of sunlight shining through the cracks in hair is great--good imagination!
3 years ago·Reply
I can tell you really love somebody: the way you describe them shows it! :)
3 years ago·Reply
I do indeed @onesmile
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