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I crave our tongues tasting each other More than I crave orgasms in my brain I crave the warmth of your embrace More than I crave your hands caressing my curves I crave my mouth against your gentle skin More than I crave air when I'm about to drown in a sea I crave the lust in your eyes I'm starving for your intimacy I'm holding my breath while my heart aches for you to make love with me I'm swollen with passion I'm thirsty for your kiss I'm begging for your closeness You never hesitate to give me all of this Because you know how I perform for your attention...
Never in a million years did I think I'd find someone so utterly and completely perfect, someone who would make me happier than I ever dreamed I could be, someone that would touch my life so profoundly and just give me a whole new reason to breathe. But then I found you and realized that everything I anticipated you to be doesn't even compare to who you are.
i thought "orgasms in my brain" was more fitting since orgasms are all chemical reactions starting in your brain. orgasms are mostly the work of your brain. I wanted the poem to be sexual but not pornographic. I didn't want to say something like "orgasms in my vagina". I needed something more technical!
sexy pic. .love it. ..
@KaitlynnJanae I agree with @timeturnerjones here! It was a complete change of pace for you, and I really enjoyed it! I appreciated your attempt to keep the passion alive, but relateable. There's a difference between pornagraphic and sensual, and you really hit the latter of the two!
That was cool.
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