DipenChheda
3 years ago1,000+ Views
Deep Where is the ground beneath Is it me That falls so deep So quick Repetitively Am I fooled So quick Repetitively I lose sense of knowing where I should be Its dark A familiar place I once seeked Now I'm back Deep Lost deep In another sweet but rough scene.
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Is deep the title of this one? I think it really suits the feeling....especially that of not being able to find the ground beneath.
3 years ago·Reply
I feel like the title could really be something more than just "deep" though if the author wants it to be :)
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