KaitlynnJanae
4 years ago5,000+ Views
My heart, how it leapt At your arrival My heart, how it died And needed revival As you packed up your things I'm still in denial. Please come back And stay for awhile
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I love the repetition of lines 1 and 3. Nice poem!
I like the simplicity of this whole thing. A complicated topic with a simple poem. Nice.
I really love the use of commas in the first few lines. I think my heart stopped with the authors :)
thank you guys :)
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