3 years ago
KaitlynnJanae
in English · 7,435 Views
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Just Stay Awhile
My heart, how it leapt At your arrival My heart, how it died And needed revival As you packed up your things I'm still in denial. Please come back And stay for awhile
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I really love the use of commas in the first few lines. I think my heart stopped with the authors :)
3 years ago·Reply
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I like the simplicity of this whole thing. A complicated topic with a simple poem. Nice.
3 years ago·Reply
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thank you guys :)
3 years ago·Reply
I love the repetition of lines 1 and 3. Nice poem!
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