debz151180
3 years ago1,000+ Views
HOPE X
Hope is the silver lining round every grey cloud, Hope is the rays in the sky when the sun comes out, Hope is the day u wake up on the right side of bed Hope is the angry thoughts u feel that are not said Hope is the light that follows the dark on every new day Hope is the right track on the path of life that leads the way Hope is the pleasure u get from your lovers kiss Hope is moment your in his arms and it feels like bliss Hope is the joy that follows every sunken heart Hope is the promise made thats kept right from the start Hope is........
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Is there going to be more? Is that why the last line is "......"? Or is that a way of showing that hope is so much more? I guess I could interpret it as either :)
3 years ago·Reply
exactly x
3 years ago·Reply
@debz151180 Cool! I'm glad I was able to pick up on that :)
3 years ago·Reply
I have quite a few ideas my mind instantly added to the end of this poem, actually. It inspired some extra thought from me!
3 years ago·Reply
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