3 years ago1,000+ Views
My brain's not ok My heart, discontented. They're both disconnected I gained back some sanity And then I spent it. Its frustrating, really. They're not on the same page One's full of logic One's full of rage One's trapped in my skull One's trapped in my ribs cage
Wow--this is a nice piece Kaitlynn. I like the discontent/disconnected parallel between those two lines! The word symmetry is beautiful.
3 years ago·Reply
thank you! you can't just skim read this or you'll miss the difference between the two words lol.
3 years ago·Reply
I actually love this piece thanks for sharing it. :-)
3 years ago·Reply
this is great. love it
3 years ago·Reply