4 years ago5,000+ Views
See I've been skeeming on the low ever since I was a toddler the difference for me is I haven't gotten caught up I'm not talking about drugs, thugs, or stealing I'm talking about being an uncover kid villain I'm plotting on taking the whole scene down I'm just a girl but I'll make all the fools look like clowns stop trying to make me laugh boy quit playing with me and speak up I can't hear you whatchu saying to me people think that I should know how they're supposed to feel well I think people out here should just be real I'm not about to start playing these childish games I'm trying to make sure the whole world knows my name I don't want to hear about another basic chick, doing basic tricks, rolling basic splifs for these tasteless misfits I want to be on a word tour racing trip so hold your basic lips miss get with this bliss. ~I.J.
Use it! absolutely! I love to hear that my lyrics can influence people and it's even cooler to hear people using the lines for fun and @timeturnerjones don't be afraid we only have so much time here it would be a shame not to relax, and to be afraid of it.
@caricakes I was thinking the same thing, but I also have a feeling I wouldn't have the guts to use that line!
I will definitely keep "hold your basic lips miss" in the back of my mind to use in an argument some day.
Thank you! :) It's nice to get feedback on writing I enjoy it a lot!
Great to see something a little different in the Creative Writing community: lyrics! I liked the syncopation of words in the line "I don't want to hear about another..." The rhythm worked really nicely.
View more comments