4 years ago10,000+ Views
This drink is sweet But compared to your lips It's nothing but filth ((((Your lips, they bleed))) Your lips-- I could kiss them till they bleed To restrain myself would be an impossible feat I may be an alcoholic But your flesh is all i need I could survive on just a lick of those soft delicious lips.
@monokalisto No I totally get that, lol!! I'm the same way--when I like a phrase I can't get rid of it. I actually heard the advice once to keep a document or journal full of these little lines and phrases, because someday the right poem will be ready for them :)
@timeturnerjones Actually, when i was writing it, the first thing that came to my mind was "(((your lips, they bleed)))'' but i couldn't continue the poem with it so i altered it... and as conceited as that may sound, i liked the initial words too much to remove them, hence the ((()))
Just wondering, did you add the ((())) in "((((Your lips, they bleed)))" just for visual effect, or is there a certain way we should read it? @monokalisto