timeturnerjones
3 years ago1,000+ Views
Just a little something I put together for @greggr 's prompt about rearranging lyrics into something new; much harder than I thought, especially if you don't add any words! Still, I tried to only use the words available.
I did change week into weak, and I changed the tense of a few words to be more grammatically correct.
Original song is Do I Wanna Know by The Arctic Monkeys! Let me know what you think? I'm not sure if this is good at all...
Original Lyrics:
Have you no idea that you're in deep? I dreamt about you nearly every night this week How many secrets can you keep? 'Cause there's this tune I found that makes me think of you somehow and I play it on repeat Until I fall asleep
Rearranged:
How many ideas of you can I keep secret? Night and I have no tune to play in, on it: I nearly fall deep asleep. Have you found that there are dreams that repeat? No; you're somehow this weak until I cause you to think about this or that that makes me about you. Every you.
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The last two lines had me a bit lost, if I'm being honest.
3 years ago·Reply
@hikaymm Yeah me too now that I'm rereading it haha XD oh well, it was just for funsies!!
3 years ago·Reply
Interesting song choice, and interesting outcome! Did you enjoy trying it? @timeturnerjones
3 years ago·Reply
@greggr Surely did!
3 years ago·Reply
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