2 years ago
jordanhamilton
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Craving Chocolate In The Summertime
he had this vibe and I was diggin it
down to the very last scoop, like ice cream on a hot summers day
I was melting inside and damn it felt good
sweatin’ him like night sweats and summers with no AC
a feeling I couldn’t shake no matter how hard I tried
trying too hard? maybe.
he wasn’t my baby, but he was giving me alicia keys and usher vibes
started calling him my boo, this was all so new - to me
you see I had fallen a couple times and the outcome wasn’t pretty
I was hoping this time would be different - I mean this brotha was fine, like aged wine
dark chocolate skin and lips sweet as honey
yeah, I admit I have a sweet tooth - at least I do now
craving dessert from dusk to dawn he satisfies all my cravings
finger licking good
got my blood pressure rising - heart beat on high
we can work it out and give things a try
see if we’re a perfect match -- light my fire
don’t blow it out
let it burn
these are my confessions
I got it bad
can you help me?
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I'm in love with the lyrical tone set by this piece! Also, very effective word choices and similes. Very different than your usual cards, but I encourage you to explore this creative side more often! A job well done.
thanks so much! I have a bunch of pieces saved in my notes on my phone. I write here and there. spoken word/poetry are my go to's when I need an outlet in private. but I will def take your advice and write this specific style more often :) @skee292